Not a bad effort - not at all
Good effort for your 2nd ever flash - I like your sounds :P
practice makes perfect - my reviewers gave me a beating but I hope u can get some complements & "constructive" critism.
I'd like you to check out my 1st flash Skitzo doodle Eps 1 and see how you like it - maybe we could help each other & stuff. Eazy_E_2004 at Hotmail dot com ^_^.
P.S. no pressure